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Post by Blackie™ on Feb 17, 2014 17:12:59 GMT -8
(I'm not sure what you said in your last post so I'll just retype what I remember form mine)
The glimpse of ginger fur and the sound of rustling startled the calico she-cat. She took a hard look at her mentor, and realized that she truly wasn't lying. Fear began to replace the anger churning in her belly, her eyes widening. Her pelt began to bristle even more, her claws began to dig deep into the Earth. She nodded slightly, scooting toward Ducksplash slowly. "Wh-what should we d-do?" Her voice was shakey as she looked around for the creature. Oh StarClan, please watch over us. I promise I'll do whatever Ducksplash says. I'll be the best Warrior ever. Her fear began to grow. Had she just cost them both their lives?
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Post by Raspberry on Feb 17, 2014 20:28:29 GMT -8
Ducksplash lashed her tail. "Go back to camp right now and fetch about two warriors. Tell them to come here. They can follow my scent. When you get back to camp, stay there." Her head turned in heavy motion to her. Her pale green eyes burning into Emberpaw‘s. "I mean it. Follow my scent, it‘ll lead you right to camp." The brown she cat barked out her orders sharply. The vixen curled,it‘s lip hungrilh, before leaping at Ducksplash. Ducksplash hissed and slammed into the fox, sending a quick swipe at it‘s ear. "Go!"
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Post by Blackie™ on Feb 17, 2014 20:49:27 GMT -8
"B-but!" The calico she-cat began to protest, but nodded and turned to leave. She bolted out of the thorn maze, following her mentor's scent through the forest. Fear pushed her faster as her heart seemed to beat harder. The camp slowly came in sight, yet Emberpaw knew she couldn't slow down. She needed to find Shatteredstar, or Ducksplash might... No. I will make it.A brown tom was emerging from the camp when a calico she-cat caught his eye. He stopped and waited, curious why the she-cat seemed to be in such a hurry. "Where's the fire, Emberpaw? I believe your brother and sister were worried about you." The sight of the brown tom relieved the she-cat slightly. She hurried to him, gasping for air. "F-fox. Du-Ducksplash. Thorn M-Maze. Hurry!" She huffed, her pelt still fluffed. Hawkstrike stood quickly, his eyes widening. "Go tell Shatteredstar now. I'll go ahead." He took off quickly, kicking up snow and mud. His eyes were wide, his jaws parted, tasting the air for the she-cat's scent. He picked it up immediately, and began to follow it to the Thorn Maze. The calico she-cat stumbled into the camp as Hawkstrike ran off in the opposite direction. She looked around wildly. "Help! Shatteredstar?! Anyone?!" She called out desperately. sand |
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Post by sand on Feb 17, 2014 21:01:28 GMT -8
Shatteredstar had been talking to her brother about patching some holes in some of the dens when she heard Emberpaw burst into camp. Startled she sprung to her paws her fur bristling wondering what was going on. She dismissed her brother and bounded over to the apprentice. "What is it?" she meowed flicking her ears back and forth. She knew something must be wrong very wrong. She waited for the she-cat to speak staring intently at the she-cat.
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Post by Raspberry on Feb 17, 2014 21:19:40 GMT -8
Ducksplash wished the warriors would come faster. A deep scratch was trickling blood across her shoulder, but she ignored the stinging pain. She rapidly ducked under the fox, biting down fiercly on it‘s hind leg.
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Post by Blackie™ on Feb 17, 2014 21:36:30 GMT -8
The she-cat began to gasp for air. "There's...a....fox....Duckspash....Thorn Maze." She choked out, her shoulders beginning to sag. "Hawkstrike left already." She was trembling still with fear, her paws itching now. She wanted to go help Ducksplash, this was all her fault. Yet, she couldn't unless told to.
Hawkstrike cleared a fallen log, coming up on the Thorn Maze. The scent of Ducksplash became stronger, and began to mix with the stench of fox. His heart was racing, he didn't know if he'd make it in time. The tang of blood filled his nostrils as he burst through the entrance, searching for the she-cat.
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Post by Raspberry on Feb 18, 2014 17:12:33 GMT -8
Ducksplash was really relieved when Hawkstrike came. "You came!" she shouts as she bit into the fox's neck, hard. The fox yelped, running away after seeing Hawkstrike there, too. As soon as the fox left, Ducksplash sank to the ground. Blood was slowly trickling out her shoulder, and another wound was on her left ear. "Is Emberpaw....safe?" She meowed slowly at last, lifting her head to stare at Hawkstrike.
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Post by sand on Feb 18, 2014 17:29:05 GMT -8
"Right stay here you are to young to fight against a fox, you would only get in the way," Shatteredstar meowed sternly. She usually wasn't like this but she had to get Emberpaw to understand. "If you want something to do you can reinforce the brambles around the entrance, the fox probably won't get this far but you never know," she meowed. "Mudwater is also here he is patching up some of the dens," she meowed. Then without waiting for an answer she bounded out of camp. She ran towards the thorn maze picking up the foxes scent as she got closer as well as Ducksplashs and Hawkstrikes scent. She ran up beside Ducksplash hissing at the fox.
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Post by Blackie™ on Feb 18, 2014 17:51:47 GMT -8
The calico she-cat nodded, a bit disappointed. She was exhausted from the run, but still wanted to help. She looked around for Mudwater, so she could begin working on the entrance.
Hawkstrike could scent his leader as she arrived. He was bristling, advancing toward the fox. The smell of blood was strong in the air, along with the stench of the fox. He could also scent his clan-mates around him. His claws dug into the Earth, his fangs barred in a hiss.
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Post by Raspberry on Feb 18, 2014 19:26:34 GMT -8
The fox snarled, and slid away in an instant
Ducksplash‘s eyes burned fiercly in Hawkstrike. "Is Emberpaw safe?" she repeated, more urgently now. She slowly wobbled on her paws and began to limp back, worried about Emberpaw.
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Post by Blackie™ on Feb 18, 2014 19:41:00 GMT -8
The brown tom pushed against Duckspalsh to support her. "When I left, she was fine. She was going to tell Shatteredstar. I doubt Shatteredstar would have let her come." He glanced back at the Clan Leader, looking for any confirmation on the Apprentice. Then again, she could have come even if she'd been told to stay behind...
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Post by Raspberry on Feb 18, 2014 20:08:48 GMT -8
Ducksplash let out a huge sigh of relief. Honestly, the pale brown she cat wasn't sure would Emberpaw actually, well, obey her ordrs. She had done nothing to make the she cat trusted her so far. "Well, thank Starclan she did." Ducksplash responded. She leaned slightly on Hawkstrike, clearly grateful for his support then. She bowed her head at Shatteredstar, "The fox seems to be gone for now. I suggest we still keep an eye on it. Patrols should keep an eye on here, even when hunting. I suggest that apprentices must have to have one warrior with them." She meowed, her voice light and crisp. |
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Post by sand on Feb 18, 2014 20:15:45 GMT -8
Shatteredstar turned towards Ducksplash glad that the fox had left but she didn't trust the fox to stay away. "Yes, I told her to stay behind and I'm sure if she tried to come that Mudwater would have stopped her," she meowed flicking her ears back and forth. "I'll lead a patrol out here later to make sure that they fox really did leave," she meowed her eyes narrowed. "Come on let us head back to camp," she meowed wincing as a thorn whacked her in the nose.
Mudwater finished patching up the warriors den and was heading off to patch up the apprentice den when he notice Emberpaw. Frowning he head over to her wondering what was going on. "What's going on?" he asked the apprentice flicking his ears back and forth.
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Post by Raspberry on Feb 18, 2014 20:25:23 GMT -8
Ducksplash nodded, clearly exhausted as she leaned heavily on Hawkstrike. She began to limp back to camp as fast as she could, she wanted to help reinforce the camp just in case the fox manages to break into it. The pain was still piercing, though Ducksplash ignored it as best as she culd.
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Post by Blackie™ on Feb 18, 2014 20:40:35 GMT -8
"Slow down! You're going to hurt yourself even more!" Hawkstrike barked at the light brown she-cat. He was able to keep up with the she-cat, but could tell she was having some issues walking back to camp.
The calico she-cat turned to the warrior, worry in her green eyes. "There was a fox, at the Thorn Maze. Ducksplash was fighting it off when she told me to come back and get help. I hope she's okay..." The she-cat stared at the camp entrance.
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