Rights & Wrongs

The Correct Form


Note; Double Posting to avoid confusion as this one is quite long.

Name: RevealedStar (Previously RevealedSky)
Age: 23 Moons.
Gender: Female.

Appearance: RevealedStar is a lithe she cat, usually moving in graceful ways. She is small, but she makes up with her speed and cleverness. She has long, thick cream colored fur with a darker shade of cream, the color of sand, running across her body. The cream color gradually faded as it reached her paws,leaving them completely white. There is also a white splotch splattered carelessly on her chest. Her tail is mainly the cream color, but flecks of sand and even brown could be found in her long, fluffy tail. Her long whiskers makes a gentle curve down, and her ears and paws are small like the rest of her. The small, bright pink nose seems to stand out in her face , with matching pink paw pads. The pale green eyes works perfectly with her other features, with them standing out as well and matching the cream color beautifully.

Personality: RevealedStar is most known for her icy, and harsh personality to other clans, other cats. She is loving and kind to cats in her own clan, full of warmth, but others will never believe it. She is as brave as an eagle when it comes to defending her clan. She is firm, determined; with a playful side she only reveals to her best friends. She never rushes in her decisions and will take her time to think, being very careful with them, sometimes, too careful. She has a soft spot for kits, and is scared to fall in love; as from previous experience, death had occurred because of her feelings, She has a fiery temper she usually keeps down, but if you get her mad, it will not be good..

Clan Wanted [LuminousClan or FrigidClan]: LuminousClan.
Rank: Leader.
Alive Relations [Kits need to join clan]: Her mother, FlameDapple.

History: RevealedStar has ShadowClan, RiverClan, and SkyClan blood. Her mother has ShadowClan
ancestry, while her father has SkyClan and RiverClan ancestry. When they were old enough, they told them about the previous clans, taught them the ways of the clan. As kits, they took on the suffix, kit, but Red, her brother, had refused to do the ways of the clans after 7 moons old. Instead, he kept his rogue name, Red, There was a band of rogues nearby; that hated the kin of the previous clans for no particular reasons. Her father, FoxSwipe, had warned RevealedPaw and her brother, Red about them. Things seem to went on fine all the way, even when RevealedPaw received her name, RevealedSky. Until she felled in love with a tom in the rogue-band, that is. When her father found out, he was in rage. He managed to led a few foxes to the rogue-band, with all cats of the group killed. It was then when the foxes wandered to a different place; he looked closer. He saw a familiar face.
Red.
Trembling with pain and anger that his own son joined, he fled, with FlameDapple. RevealedSky had moped for five moons, feeling uncertain, unsure. It was later when she wanted to fulfill her parents‘ dream - let the clans rise again. That was how LuminousClan was born, and took over leadership of the clan.

Roleplay Sample: RevealedStar strode confidently in the Pines, each of her pawstep firm as she padded on the cool, mucky ground. She felt safe under The Pibes, and the warm sunlight was still able to peek in the forest, it's rays glowing lightly at the forest floor. The cream colored leader parted her jaws, hoping desperately to have a trace of prey-scent. To her surprise, a faint trace of rabbit hit her. Faint, but not stale. Fresh. She swiftly dropped into a balanced crouch, creeping up to the scrawny rabbit hiding under a bush. She waited for a few moments before pouncing, her paws swiping at the rabbit‘s throat. She sat up quickly, the rabbit dangling in her haws. There was a smile across her features; and her pale green eyes was shining.

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